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Minggu, 09 Maret 2014

Living in Apartment; Living in Benefits


Thesis statement:
Living in an apartment can be benefited for several aspects of life.

One of the essential needs of humans is having a house as a place to live in. A typical house can be a dream living space for some people. Ranging from a big-luxurious to a classy-simple one, a house has been a symbol of lifestyle in people’s life. This issue can perhaps affect their consideration in deciding what type of house that they wish to have. People may decide to live in a house which is paid in cash. Meanwhile others may feel better to live in an apartment. Besides, living in an apartment can be benefited for several aspects of life.
We cannot deny the fact that people who live in apartment are wealthy and sometimes famous. An apartment has been a symbol of modern lifestyle with its comfort and extra facilities. Living in apartment can instantly boost people’s self-prestige because they will be considered as the rich and honored. By choosing an apartment as a living space, people also have their own authority to held a small event inside and invite their friends as they want. Then the visitors can enjoy and feel pleasant as they can share everything together without any barrier.
Besides, living in apartment can affect people’s personality. As people sign a contract with the apartment’s owner, they have to agree about all of the conditions. Therefore, they are demanded to be always aware and discipline to the regulations in which apartment they are staying in. Not only that, people who live in apartment also know how to respect the neighbors. They will think twice to do the chores that may disturb others who live beside their apartment.
The issue of privacy is also one important aspect for people who live in apartment. By renting or buying an apartment, they start to live in privacy as if it is the secret space of them. These people like to do things alone and an apartment is just a perfect place for them. Furthermore, the apartment also guarantees their right to have a safety of living. They don’t need to be worry or afraid of crimes because there are security officers who always keep watching all the day.
In brief, an apartment offers a few benefits for people who choose it. One of them is that living in an apartment can boost people's self-prestige and they are free to invite their friends. Moreover, people who live in an apartment can be more discipline and honored to their neighbors as there’s a contract they have to commit. In addition, an apartment is a perfect place for those who want to live in privacy and safety. Considering an apartment as our dream living space may be a good step for us who live in this modern era. However, it depends on the personal needs and how people plan their own dream house.
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Minggu, 02 Maret 2014

[Essay Outline] Necessities of Owning a Car


See the introductory paragraph here.

Title: Necessities of Owning a Car
Thesis: Owning a car is a necessity for several reasons.
I.                   Introduction
A.    Facts/Background
B.     Thesis
II.                A Car for Emergencies
A.    In emergency to bring the sick to the hospital
B.     In emergency to evacuate people from the disastrous area
III.             A Car for Family Picnics
A.    Having quality time
B.     Having save baggage
C.    Having easy transport
IV.             A Car for Business
A.    Business of rental
B.     Business of pick up and drop facility
V.                Conclusion
A.    Thesis
B.     Summary of arguments 
C.  Final impression
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Rabu, 26 Februari 2014

Social Conflicts that Caused by The Disappearance of Social Communication

Life is not always easy. There is a growth of inconvient situations everyday. One of them is the development of technology that make people become more and more individualistic. Laptop, tablet, cellphone, and the other kinds of computer technology have became the real evidence of individualism tendency. The space of social communication tends to be disappeared from the norm of socialization. This disappearance of social communication can cause several conflicts among the members of society.
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Selasa, 25 Februari 2014

Necessities of Owning a Car


Thesis statement
Owning a car is a necessity for several reasons
Topic sentences
  • Perhaps the first reason why people need to own a car is for emergencies.
  • Besides for emergencies, a car is also needed for family picnics.
  • In addition, people can run their own business by utilizing a car.
Introductory Paragraph
Nowadays, the technology of transportation has been developed. By utilizing the natural resources, people are succeed in creating various kinds of motor vehicles. Ranging from steam ships that has ever been used as warships to rockets that bring people to explore the outer space. One of the useful transportation is cars. Cars have been the most popular vehicle. Besides its popularity, owning a car is a necessity for several reasons.
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